“This isn’t what I meant when I said I wanted a vacation.”
“What? It’s beautiful here.”
“I nearly died going down a waterfall.”
“But it was a pretty view on the way down.”
Dialogue Prompt #5
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Is this your ideal vacation scenario? =)
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This sounds like a conversation I would actually have with my husband.
I’m trying to get to the beginning of one of your stories. I hope I’m not missing a page that links the chapters in order because I have been known not to look hard enough for such things. I’m sure it will be worth me hunting around the site to find the beginning through. I enjoyed what I read about Asena (didn’t even look to see when you wrote it or if you finished it yet! It came up as a suggestion for me when I looked up serial fiction, which I’ve started doing as well.)
Keep writing! I’m enjoying reading.
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I’m glad you liked it! This is a conversation I could have with my husband too!
Here’s the link to all the Asena chapters written so far. Thanks for reading! I’ll have to check yours out!
https://rachelsmithwriting.com/category/writing/sunday-story-segment/
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