Beware “turning” words, a word or phrase that helps shift your story to go in a new direction usually by telling rather than showing. A heavy reliance on them lends towards less action and less engagement with the reader. Turning words to avoid: suddenly; then; out of nowhere; surprisingly; shockingly; seemed Examples: Turning words: Suddenly,… Continue reading Quick Tip #1
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